Aster Arch

I help coaches go from vague to premium by building a distinct language system that sells. In just 30 days, we build a Signature Language System™ that includes:

•  A proprietary language bank to keep their messaging consistent
•  A compelling name for their coaching program or offer
•  Named frameworks, models, and metaphors
•  Memorable phrases and taglines

By naming the steps of the transformation, the coaches offer looks and feels like a proven system, not a vague promise. That structure gives buyers confidence. It signals clarity, expertise, and repeatable results. And it makes the offer instantly referable, recognizable, and ready to sell.

Communications Consultant

•  Expanded and enhanced executive profiles (internally and externally) by creating clear, strategic, engaging, thought leadership content for keynote addresses, videos, presentations, blogs, social media, webinars, and partner/customer/media events. 
> The increased executive profile elevated the partner business, which became a pillar of SAP strategy.
•  Established and drove reputation of “advocacy & amplification” team with employees, partners, and customers.
> This led to greater support for the team and furthered the recognition of partner value.
•  Create event content (email marketing, and presenter and panel talking points) 
•  Wrote customer success stories. 
> Showcased positive relationship between SAP and partners in serving customers.
•  Supported partner public relations with strategy, direction, and content development.
> This educated and empowered partners to use public relations to grow their businesses.

Senior Editor, Partner Advocacy and Amplification 

•   Managed SAP’s global review process of partner press releases – with zero escalations.
•  Improved partner press releases for quality and clarity to increase media pickup.
•  Managed internal SAP reviews and approvals across multiple stakeholders.
•  Diplomatically integrated feedback from multiple SAP stakeholders into partner press releases to ensure accuracy and reduce legal exposure. 
•  Streamlined review process for SAP employees and partners to make it faster and easier.

Senior Editor, Public Relations and Marketing

OxiCool, Inc

•  Managed all communications, marketing, and branding activity for this clean-tech start-up.
•  Maximized the brand story (of the founder and company) to secure ongoing venture capital.
•  Coached CEO/founder in effective storytelling and messaging for media and speaking engagements.

Vice President Communications and Marketing

bswift, an Aetna company

• Developed end-to-end communication strategy, to deliver a single, clear user experience
• Drove focus on clear language to improve user experience when shopping, comparing, and buying health plans
• Created “Best Practices Guide” for account teams to improve client websites
• Led content strategy to deliver information where consumers needed it in the sales funnel

Director, Content Strategy

Aetna

•	Led in-house creative (copywriters, web managers, proofreaders to improve readability and consumer focus 
•	Cross-trained staff for greater business knowledge and to expand contributors’ value
•	Led development of department workflow process that improved productivity and reporting
•	Worked with internal clients to meet their business goals while protecting the company brand
•	Led content streamlining and re-writing of Aetna.com (Brought external work in-house to save approximately $600,000)

Director, Content and Communications (creative agency)

•	Architect of Aetna’s plain language initiative, which brought national attention to the company as a thought leader and led to the inclusion of clear communication in the new brand voice
•	Created award-winning employee newsletter on clear communication 
•	Formed editorial review board that solved language/brand voice problems
•	Consulted on user experience in creation and improvement of industry-leading Health Assessment and Payment Estimator digital tools

Digital Engagement (Content Creator, Web Manager)

•	Created content that increased visits and page views, and helped win a Webby Award
•	Delivered content and tools to DiscoveryHealth.com to further the reach of the brand
•	Ghosted articles for doctors (in Better Homes & Gardens) that increased name recognition

Writer/Editor/Digital Producer for InteliHealth, an Aetna company

You’re a coach with an offer that works.
But too many sales call feel like a 30-minute explain-athons that end in ghosting.

You're paying the Language Tax...
The hidden cost of vague, forgettable messaging that drains revenue AND confidence.

Here's what it looks like:

- Content with views but no conversions.
- Ghosted sales calls and endless explaining.
- Weak referrals – even fans struggle to explain what you do.

Every unclear phrase costs you...

- trust
- time
- and $3K–$10K per lost client 

This isn't just a marketing problem; it's a revenue leak.

I help coaches, creators, and experts eliminate the Language Tax and recover lost revenue by transforming your expertise into a Signature Language System™. 

This isn’t copy polish; it’s a revenue rescue mission to ensure your words work as hard as you do.

We'll build language that:

- Commands premium prices (no over-explaining).
- Converts without convincing (value is undeniable).
- Makes you impossible to confuse, overlook, or undersell.

Here's how my Signature Language System (30-day 1:1 engagement) systematically builds your market-ready language toolkit:

✅ Architect Core Language
Develop a stand-out program name and proprietary Signature System (your unique, easy-to-explain method).

✅ Forge Unstoppable Differentiation 
Craft a Positioning Glove and Memorability Matrix to make you uniquely unforgettable and immune to price comparison.

✅ Master Sales-Ready Content
Get a high-converting tagline, key phrases for those "So what do you do?" moments, and a Sales Copy Kit to attract ideal clients.

✅ Activate Your Rollout Playbook
Launch new language across LinkedIn, offer docs, and sales calls, seeing results from week one.

Proof It Works:
Brian Martinez, a top fitness coach, transformed his sales, booking multiple $500–$1,000 clients in 30 days. His secret? Not changing his funnel, pricing, or service — just his words.

My background ghostwriting for Fortune 100 execs, doctors, and top-tier coaches taught me this...
Brilliant ideas often get buried in jargon. The problem isn't expertise; it's weak language.

I help ambitious experts stop explaining and start enrolling by shaping brand language that sells as if your next client is already convinced.

If your message isn't pulling its weight, you're paying a silent tax. Let’s fix that.

DM me "LANGUAGE TAX" today. 
We'll find where your message is leaking money and permanently close that gap.

Brian Berkenstock

Before anyone gets themself all overheated…

I’m not saying everyone needs a college degree.
Some of the smartest, most capable people I know are self-taught.
What I am saying is that education wasn’t meant to just make us employable.

Education has serious problems that need fixing, for sure...
But that doesn't mean we should treat “educated” like a dirty word. 
Or think learning is a waste of time.

There's a difference between reasonable critique and thoughtless contempt.

Your offer’s confusing | I make it clear and memorable | This means positioning, branding, and messaging that connects | Cats can be fuzzy, your offer cannot

Our Kids Will Be Rich and Stupid

There's no HOOK for today's post.
Just some...hesitation.

I'm doing something a bit out of the ordinary for me.
Sharing a personal story.
(With the help of Sandra Macele and her Authority cohort!)

I've been trying to walk a delicate line on LinkedIn.

On one side is BUSINESS.
On the other is SOCIAL.

The biz side is a piece of cake.

I have oodles of experience.
A solid offer.
And killer testimonials.

The personal/social side has been a challenge.

I like the social sharing aspect of LinkedIn.
And getting to know people beyond their banners.
But I don't like "trauma dumping." 
Which feels both revealing and artificial at the same time.

I first need some guardrails for myself.
Here's where I landed...

I'll try to share stories to inspire or help us look at things in a new light.

Let me know how I did.

A Life of No Regret

Do you want a “catchy” program name or one that goes KA-CHING?  

Amateurs chase “catchy” because they don’t know what makes people buy. 

So they pile on adjectives, layer in excess words, and sprinkle in “elevate” for good measure. (Then they wonder why nobody remembers or buys it.) 

Meanwhile, offer names that sell aren’t "cute." 
They’re clear because they hit the right nerve.
They sound like something you’d brag about owning. 

This carousel walks through 7 rules for naming that make people stop, smile, and say, “Wait, what’s that?” 

Swipe through "Name Your Program."

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

Name Your Program

A coach said, “I used ChatGPT to name my offer." 
("Okaaaaay," I thought.)
Said it sounded great, until the realization hit that it could name anyone’s offer.

This is the silent cost of AI-created content.
(The Language Tax you pay and don't realize.)
You can publish AI content, but you can’t OWN IT.

An offer name may work thematically, but FAIL EMOTIONALLY.
That's because AI can fit a mold, but it can't build a mission.

That’s when this coach hired me.
Not to make the offer name fancy, but to make it "ownable."

AI names what exists.
I name what stands apart.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

AI Can't Write Sticky

Don't beat yourself up!
This communication stuff is hard.
For example, many folks think "clarity sells."
It doesn’t.

Clarity only works when people already CARE.

If they don’t care, “explaining it better” won't help.

That’s why your “clarity” doesn’t create clients.

In my new carousel, I show why clarity fails (and what creates conversion).

See why clarity without desire is one of the costliest traps in coaching.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging

Clarity is Only Half the Story

After a year of working with coaches and consultants, I’ve noticed a pattern. Those who convert best don’t sound smarter, they sound TRUER.

They find ways to make their words carry conviction. You can FEEL that they’ve lived what they’re saying.

AI can echo expertise, but never experiences.
It can list benefits, but not capture beliefs.

And that gap between “what sounds right” and “what feels real” is everything.

That’s why I don’t just write clearer copy. I build positioning and language to make your brand unforgettable. 

The kind of words no one but you could own.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

OK, I'm saying it, "You don’t need better AI prompts."

Every day I see people blaming AI for “Not getting it right.”
But it’s not the tech. It’s the thinking.

AI can follow instructions, but it can’t read our INTENTIONS.
AI can clean up our sentences, but it can’t clarify our THINKING.

AI doesn’t know who you’re talking to or what they care about.
AI can’t sense the tiny moments when readers stop believing you.
 
If we don’t know what we’re trying to be or prove, no prompt can save us.
If a message isn’t clear in the writer’s head, no algorithm can untangle it.

AI makes sentences.
Thinkers make sense.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

Brian vs. AI. (Good gravy, it's not even close!)

Some coaches hire a naming expert and get a list generated by ChatGPT. 

Here's what goes into building brand language that actually sells.
My process starts with a simple rule: No AI until the human work is done.
 
Generative AI is a powerful tool, but a terrible strategist. It can't understand nuance, hear the energy or excitement in your voice, or uncover metaphors you don't even know you use. That's my job.

Before any algorithm gets involved, I'm deep in the trenches with:

I. Recorded Calls 
I listen to your client calls to find hidden language that may resonate and connect.

II. Semantic Maps

I visually cluster your concepts to find the sweet spot between what you DO and what your clients NEED.

III. Brand Archetypes 
I align your name not just to your offer, but to your identity (Like Sage, Hero, and Rebel).

IV. Mouthboards 
(My alternative to visual moodboards). I collect your linguistic inspiration — podcasts, book titles, song lyrics — to define and refine your unique tone.

AI can't notice the metaphor hidden in an offhand comment. And it can't pull inspiration from your cultural identity or that phrase your grandmother used to say.

My 3-phase process does that and more:

1. FOUNDATION // The Deep Dive 
I don't start with words, but with structure. I pressure-test your offer to ensure the foundation is solid before we build language on top of it.

2. EXCAVATION // The Human Work 
Through live sessions, The Naming Forge, and The Language Lab, I excavate, shape, and polish concepts rooted in psychological and emotional truth, not rehashed buzzwords.

3. ACTIVATION // The Launchpad 
I don't just hand you a name and walk away. Through the Concept Reveal, Precision Polish, and Language Launch, I give you assets and a plan to implement.

This is a complete Signature Language System:

> A system to productize your offer and raises your perceived value. 
> A Positioning Glove that fits only you, separating you from the crowd. 
> A Word Bank that makes content creation effortless and authentic. 
> Strategic Phrases for calls, podcasts, and DMs to elevate confidence. 
> A Launch Playbook to unveil your new brand language with impact.

This isn't about simply naming an offer. This is the foundation of an ownable brand, which gives your life's work a voice that can't be ignored.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

A “good enough” name for your offer is NEVER good enough.
Especially when competitors use the same AI tools.

With so many people using the same tools, we risk language becoming like wallpaper — clean, correct, and instantly forgettable.

The difference between “content” and “communication” is ownership.
AI can help you write faster, but only humans can write something that sticks.

AI builds patterns.
I build signatures.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

NO! Your brand is not “fine.”
It’s familiar, which is a tragic weakness.

Every brand that feels “okay” borders on being irrelevant.

People wait for something obvious to "go wrong" before they fix their brand...

> A drop in sales
> A quiet pipeline
> A client saying, “We went in another direction.”

Look closely and you'll see most brands don’t collapse suddenly. 
They drift into oblivion.

A voice that once felt BAZINGA now now feels BLAH.
A story that once sold now sounds stale.

A brand audit can help you FIND YOURSELF before the market misses you.

Swipe through the carousel to see what drift looks like, and why awareness — not aesthetics — is the first step back to strength.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

How to Audit Your Brand

You know how you have a great offer…?
But you struggle to explain it clearly.
Or in a way people remember.

Well, I fix that. 

That’s all I have to say today.

*****							

👋 I’m BrianB.
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

I'd like to coin a new word today — "blanding." 
That’s the combination of "branding" and "blending in."
It's what AI does so well.

Can AI make your messaging faster and easier?
Yes.
 
Does it make your language/brand unique and "ownable?"
It does not. 

AI can do many cool things, but it’s not built to MAKE YOU STAND OUT. 

AI is built on averages. 
It studies what’s come before and predicts what’s likely to come next. 

That’s not branding, it's blending.
(C'mon, Help me out here. Let's all call is "blanding" from now on.) 

Ask AI to “Make my offer clear” and it WILL clean up your sentences. 
But it can’t see the gap between what you MEAN and what an audience HEARS. 

AI can handle grammar and punctuation — though it’s quite heavy handed with the em dash, isn't it? — but AI doesn’t do well with things that matter to your brand, like empathy and tension. 

No matter how many times you say, “Make this sound better,” AI can’t fix what it doesn’t understand. And that's the human element.

That’s why I don't worry when people say, “I’ll use AI for my positioning, branding, and naming.” 

AI can polish words. My process architects meaning. 

So shoot me a DM if you’re tired of sounding like the bland dreck AI spits out. 

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👋 I’m BrianB. 
💡 I build positioning systems to make your offer unforgettable 
🎯 Names, frameworks, processes, and taglines people remember 
💬 DM me if your brilliance needs better packaging 
🐾 My cats and my kids like me!

Boxed - Offer Design

Founder

Positioning & Messaging Consultant

Chief Niche Builder

LEFTFIELD

Finding and communicating your product's difference.

Treacle - Positioning your agency as the obvious choice

Strategic Director

Chief Operations Officer

Head of Creative

Founder & SaaS Onboarding Consultant

Myself

I write better emails for SaaS companies.

Freelance Writer

Receptive.io

Leading B2B SaaS companies use Receptive to build winning products by managing product feedback from their customers, their teams, and the market.

I'm in charge of Receptive's content marketing efforts - creating content for our site, and turning visitors into leads.

Head Of Content

Your confusing offer is costing you clients. I’ll help you fix it with a blend of positioning, productisation, and messaging.

You've got a problem with your agency's positioning if:

□ Prospects don't get what you actually do.
□ Your website sounds like everyone else’s.
□ Every project ends up being messy and bespoke.
□ You end up competing on price, speed, or both.
□ Sales cycles drag on for what feels like forever.

So you need to position around your agency's core use case.

Your prospects don't think in terms of fancy abstract positioning. They think in terms of use cases. They think: "How can this agency help me solve my problem?".

So we work with you to figure out your agency's own use case — your winning combo of client, problem, and solution — so that your value is instantly clear to your ideal clients.

Get our Positioning Clarity Sprint...

A 2-week process to sharpen your agency's positioning and write a new homepage that makes your value obvious.

What you get:

□ Intake questionnaires and analysis
□ 3 hours of remote workshops
□ Agency use case canvas
□ Homepage messaging on a lo-fi wireframe

Pricing: £2,500
(or £1,500 for solos)

DM me to chat about working together.

Joe Daniels 📦

Most agencies are playing a game they've already lost.

They spend their days trying to convince people who don't want their service to suddenly want it.

Meanwhile, there are prospects out there RIGHT NOW actively looking for exactly what they do. But those agencies are so busy chasing the people who can't be convinced to be findable by those who are ready-to-buy.

Think about it...

Every hour you spend "educating the market" is an hour you're not making yourself obvious to people already educated.

Every piece of content trying to convince skeptics is content that doesn't help believers find you.

Every sales call with someone who needs persuading is a call you're not having with someone who just needs to know you exist.

The uncomfortable truth? If someone doesn't already want what you're selling, you're probably not going to change their mind.

But if someone DOES want what you're selling and can't find you? That's entirely your fault.

Stop trying to create demand. Start capturing it.

Your job isn't to convince the world they need your service. It's to be the obvious choice when they realise they do.

I help agencies fix their positioning, offers, and messaging so prospects actually get it.

Does anyone else open LinkedIn on their laptop only to be distracted by LinkedIn on their phone?

Or is it just me that has a crippling addiction?

Your confusing homepage is costing you clients. So I’ll fix your messaging in two days with my Homepage Clarity Sprint.

Recently I stumbled upon an idea that I think neatly encapsulates my entire philosophy in one snappy sentence.

And I wanted to try it on for size with you...

"Your homepage should be a landing page"

Now I realise this sounds deceptively simple. But let me unpack it.

A lot of agencies and consultants treat their homepage like a brochure. They talk to multiple audiences about multiple services and offers and give multiple next steps.

And that confuses the hell out of any prospects that land on the page.

They don't see themselves in the messaging. They don't understand whether you can help them, and what they can even buy from you. And so they disappear into the no man's land of the competitive landscape to go and find someone they know can actually help them.

That lack of clarity shows up in virtually every homepage I come across.

But when you switch your perspective and start seeing your homepage as a landing page then everything changes. Suddenly that confusing messaging makes no sense. Those multiple use cases feel like nonsense.

And you start to focus. You start to think in terms of a sharp, pointed page that clearly outlines one core use case for one target client. You stop bombarding them with all those different CTAs and you present a clear next step.

And all that means that your ideal client lands on your homepage, instantly sees how you can help them, and knows exactly what they should do next.

Your homepage stops being a messy brochure and starts being a sales tool. Your homepage becomes your landing page.

Maybe you disagree. Maybe you think this is the best thing since sliced bread. Either way I'd appreciate your thoughts.

Oh, and if you're wondering whether your homepage is confusing, why not grab a free roast of yours using the link on my profile? Consider it a christmas present.

Do you need logos on your homepage?

Conventional wisdom says "Yes! Of course you do!"

But having roasted close to a hundred homepages (phew) over the past few years there's a common mistake I see when it comes to logos.

And it's this:

People put logos on their homepage that NOBODY RECOGNISES.

Like sure, if you've worked with massive household names then logos make a ton of sense. Share away. Stick them everywhere.

But if your clients aren't going to be recognisable, then those logos aren't helping.

In fact, they might be hindering.

Because people might see a load of logos they don't know and think:

a) this mustn't be my industry
b) these guys only work with small fry

Neither of which will help make your case.

So instead I advise this:

Replace the logos with actual testimonials.

This does three things that help turn your homepage into a sales page:

1) It removes the whole "who are they?" logo problem

2) Testimonials actually build more credibility

3) Done right, they can reinforce your core message

So take a look at your homepage, scan through your logos, and ask yourself if they're actually doing anything useful.

If not, chuck them away and stick some testimonials in there instead.

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Hi, I'm Joe and this is my attempt at a lame LinkedIn signoff. Imagine a sexy voice saying something like "You've been listening to Joe Daniels." Oh also if you want a homepage roast then send me a DM.

Saying you're the best isn't believable.

Even if you are nobody's going to believe you.

And let's face it you probably aren't the best anyway.

But saying you're the best fit for a specific client in a specific situation?

Now that's way more believable.

And not only that but it speaks to your ideal clients in a way that makes them sit up and take notice.

Here's an example:

"We're the best SEO agency"

Yawn. Yuck. What a load of nonsense.

"We're the best SEO agency for FMCG brands trying to break into new locations"

Now we're talking. This is something I could actually believe. 

All you have to do then is show why you're the best through your POV or approach or IP.

So I guess the lesson is don't try to be the best full stop. Try to be the best for your specific client's situation.

Most agencies treat their homepage like a catalog.

When it should actually be a landing page.

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